Act 3 — Study the masters · Week 18 of 52
Richard Pryor
How much truth can a laugh carry?
Say the thing you've been editing out.
The five moves
Same rhythm, every week.
1 — Study
Live in Concert and Sunset Strip. Watch him play every character in his own story.
Watch on purpose. Specific comedians, specific reason.
2 — Deconstruct
Map one story: who does he become, and when does he return to himself?
Isolate one mechanism. Name it before you use it.
3 — Write
One story from your worst year, told with characters instead of summary.
10–25 premises minimum. Quantity buys quality.
4 — Perform
Tell it. Do not protect yourself.
Somewhere live. The classroom is useful; the audience is the laboratory.
5 — Review
Did vulnerability create tension, or ask for sympathy? Those are different.
Watch the tape. Log what the room did, not what you felt.
The Comedy Genome
Tag what made you laugh.
Tag every joke you studied this week. After a few months the pattern stops being an opinion and becomes your comedy DNA.
Your twin asks
Eleven questions, every week.
- What made you laugh this week?
- What did the audience laugh at?
- Where did you lose them?
- Which jokes feel most like you?
- What are you afraid to say?
- What's the funniest version of this?
- What would Pryor do with this?
- What would Carlin attack?
- What would Hedberg remove?
- What would Rock repeat?
- What would Bamford make uncomfortably specific?
